posted 10-03-2001 05:46 PM
Ok I played it an beat it in 15 minutes. All of it. Now thats a bit short for 2 levels.
It was a pleasant level by the way but to easy. You need to add some more inovating traps or just some really cool looking things in your level. I hate crawl spaces but if say exapanded it to 3 sqaures wide and made a cave like molding(have tiles bend around) that could add more feel to it.
The first part (the pyramid) the straight walls around the desert must go, replace them with sloped tiles.
Your rooms feel oversized. Add more objects (pillars holding up ceilings) and have parts of the ceiling come down to meet them.
The temples are WAY to light you need to make them much darker.
The part with the lava and the 3 switches. 
To easy. Make each one a trap to get to.
1)have to jump over sets of flames
3)Pushable blocks must go in certain way to open path
4)Get set on fire and run fall in water then push switch turning off flames and opening door.
Try to add depth to the level by passing by a room with a fence and you can see a whole rooom that looks so cool but you never get there. Or have it see a room youll go to much later.
Backtracking is sometimes good. You start out and there is only one way to go but there is a HIGH ledge you cant get to and a cool looking tile on the ground. You run around do some stuff wind up back at the start and you can now access the ledge, run around some more now the floor opened up on that tile and you continue.
See what I mean?
Again the level was very enjoyable but wasnt hard enough.
Hope that helps
N.